Production Setup

ElementSpecification
ShotEye-level medium close-up (MCU), dark/black background
OutfitDark crew neck (not logo’d), fitted
Lens35mm or 50mm, shallow depth of field
Format16:9 master (crop-safe for 9:16 Reels)
TeleprompterYes — revised script loaded
LightingKey light + subtle rim/hair light. Moody, not flat.
AudioLapel mic + room tone recording

Music Direction

Mapped to the revised VSL sections. Music should support — never compete with — Harry’s delivery.

SectionMusic Direction
Hook (0:00–0:10)Silence. Let the words land.
Problem (0:10–0:45)Low tension bed. Subtle, building unease.
Agitation (0:45–1:20)Tension continues, slightly more urgent. Drops on “you weren’t ready.”
Credibility (1:15–1:35)Warmer. Resolving. Confident but not triumphant.
Solution (1:50–2:35)Positive momentum. Building energy. This is the turning point.
Differentiator (2:35–3:00)Near-silence. Honest, conversational. Let Harry’s voice carry it.
Social Proof (3:00–3:10)Quiet confidence building. Each case study gets a subtle beat.
Offer (3:35–4:05)Clean, generous energy. Not urgent — confident.
CTA (3:50–4:10)Clean stop. Final line delivered in silence. Logo.

B-Roll Shot List

Required B-roll elements. Capture separately from the main A-roll shoot.

  1. Google Ads CPC bar chart animation — $44 → $70+
  2. Google AI Overview screenshot — real, fresh on shoot day
  3. ChatGPT search result screenshot
  4. Perplexity search result screenshot
  5. Generic “agency report” mockup — fabricated, no real data
  6. StudioHawk office footage — team working, screens, meetings
  7. Award ceremonies / trophy shelf walkthrough
  8. Workshop room setup — desks, screens, playbooks
  9. Claude AI screen recording — page being built
  10. Google Search Console growth curve — anonymised
  11. Case study stat cards — plumber 200 leads, physio −40% ad spend, skincare 2x traffic
  12. Offer checklist animation — workshop, 6 months, Hawk OS, Tailfeather
  13. Tailfeather Guarantee badge animation
  14. City names animation — Melbourne, Sydney, Brisbane, London, Atlanta

Text Overlay Style Guide

PropertyValue
FontSpace Grotesk Bold
Primary colourWhite
Accent colourCyan (#00BEFF) for key terms
Stats colourGold (#FFD700) for numbers
Negative colourRed for problems/costs
PositionBottom-third
AnimationFade in 0.3s, hold 2–3s, fade out 0.3s
CaptionsBurned-in for all social cuts

Filming Checklist

Pre-shoot checklist. Confirm all items before rolling.

  • ☐ Teleprompter loaded with revised VSL script (v5)
  • ☐ Dark crew neck outfit ready
  • ☐ Key light + rim light positioned
  • ☐ Camera at eye level, 35mm/50mm lens
  • ☐ Room tone recording (30 seconds minimum)
  • ☐ B-roll shots captured separately (see shot list)
  • ☐ Test 16:9 frame AND 9:16 crop-safe zone
  • ☐ Water off-camera for Harry
  • ☐ Backup recording device active
  • ☐ $3,500 anchor price confirmed on landing page before filming
  • ☐ Hawk Academy member count updated to latest number
  • ☐ 45 awards confirmed (not 42)

Key Updates from v5

What changed in the script that affects the storyboard.

  • Forbes removed from credibility section — no Forbes badge needed in B-roll for credibility
  • Awards expanded: “Seven times Best Large SEO Agency, judged by fifty independent reviewers. Forty-five industry awards.”
  • AI team: “Three people working full-time on AI implementation” (not “three AI engineers”)
  • Hawk OS: “A version of the same AI system our agency runs on”
  • Catchphrase: “Stop guessing. Start showing up.” (not “Start ranking”)
  • Hook A rebuilt around AI Search opportunity, not agency attack
  • Agitation section reframed: “you weren’t ready” + “dodgy agencies exist,” not blanket agency attack